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SSAT写作范文欣赏,作文得高分要注意什么

发布时间:2016-12-27
写作既考量了学生的语言能力,逻辑能力,还考验了同学们的文化底蕴,所以,虽然SSAT考试成绩总分里面并没有把写作算进去,但作文却是招生官们考核学生能力的重要标准。怎样的写作能够得到考官的青睐,想要在作文上得高分要注意什么,下面我们通过一些SSAT写作范文来领悟一些技巧。
 
  2015年2月7日SSAT作文题目:They was on journey for five days, five hours and five minutes…下面是高分作文范文:
  They was on a journey for five days, five hours and five minutes, which meant nearly six days without attending school and returning her home. Raylene thought about the worried faces of her teachers and classmates—did they know she didn’t want to quit school? Or did her mother know she was in a different city? Did they call the police and reported her disappearance? What if they treated her father as a criminal and sent him to prison? She thought about all these possibilities, each more horrifying than the other, then she looked down at her swelling legs, which were caused by the mosquitoes, numerous of them. But these itching red bites had distracted her from all those dreadful thoughts. She looked up, and met her father’s concerning eyes. It was hard to tell his facial expression from a six-year-old girl’s angle, but she had formed an unsuitable maturity which allowed her to sense other people’s feelings, even the smallest ones.
  “Don’t worry, papa, they don’t hurt,” she made a lie. “It is just that the mosquitos like me too much.”
  ......
  There was something shinning in Martin’s eyes. He took Raylene away because he missed her so much but she didn’t belong to him after the divorce. He felt the pain was about to kill him so he took her away and escaped, but now he understood the pain was mutual—you could never underestimate what a broken relationship could bring about. He gave her a warm hug and murmured, “I will, when we come back, and I promise.”
  Raylene sank into a deep sleep after that on her father’s knees. In her beautiful dream, she was playing in a park with her mom and dad, together.
 
  2015年12月12日SSAT写作题目之一是:what job do you think should earn the most?下面是高分作文范文:
  Elegant, competent and diligent, those are the words one should find most aptly illustrative of a teacher. In our mind’s eyes, a teacher is to be tastefully dressed,genteelly embraced, standing gracefully in front of a solemn podium bestowing melodious preachings that enlighten the most dubious heads in the world. And yes, deserving they might be, well paid and well received, only the normal ones though. As exceptions prevail on every occasion, so does the case of this one. For there lives in this bit of the universe one kind of creature that seems to rise above the physiological as well as psychological defines of human beings, the ones that are called teachers from New Oriental.
  ......
  Thinking it must take a fortune before one can be equipped with a certain number of vocabularies, the boy ventured a guess.
  “You mean one has to memorize a word 100 times? ” the boy asked meticulously.
  “No!” smiled the teacher.
  ......
  The boy jerked as if something suddenly dawned on him, and was plunged into deep thoughts without even noticing that the teacher had gone far.
  Only the sight of the teacher’s back seems shinning with persistence and firm belief that characteristic of New Oriental, and only that of New Oriental.
 
  我们可以再欣赏一个SSAT高分作文范文,题目是Haste makes waste:
  “Haste makes waste” is an old English idiom which tells us that if you do things too quickly or too carelessly, you are likely to make more mistakes and end up with bad result. It has been true throughout the history and is absolutely true in the world today. I want to sustain my opinion throughout the following two examples.
 
  One of the examples that I want to illustrate is the problem-causing construction of the stadium in my neighborhood which was constructed in order to hold the National Sports Game ten years ago. I learned from my mother that the stadium was built only for half a year in a great hurry and haste......
 
  The failure of my test may also be regarded as a very persuasive example of “Haste makes waste”. Once I had a hard time preparing for an extremely complicated but important final-exam in my school. The fact is that I didn’t manage my schedule well and had to go over all the notes and papers in at most 6 hours, in other words, I didn’t have time to rest, to sleep, to have meals but just to keep working. ......
 
  In sum, nothing good can be done unless you do it with great clam and carefulness, if not, it will probably result in an even more costly and worthless consequence. Just as the example: most of the spelling mistakes are caused because people spell the words too quickly and carelessly without checking them again. Thus, what we should do now is try to be more careful and responsible of what we’re going to do and avoid those unnecessary mistakes.
  综合上面三篇SSAT写作范文,相信同学们或多或少能够总结出一些写作得方法和心得,下面小编来总结一下,同学们看看我们想的一样不一样。

      SSAT作文得高分要注意什么
  1、紧扣主题。
  2、尽可能去使用一些稍微高级一点的词汇。
  3、学会同义词的替换。
  4、合理地组织你的文章,要让阅读者一眼就能看出你的文章的基本结构。
  5、最好能够使用自身亲身经历来写,将谚语的深刻含义用贴近生活的实例说明白。
  6、巧妙构思,能够在给出的题目的基础上进行构思出人物、事物或者环境,然后对这些关系进行详细的描述。
 

 

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